This was a nice story, two people finding love, ultimately making a baby and marriage. My lament is that it was so short. I felt like I was drinking from a fire hose and I desperately longed for some backstory and more romance and time together for the couple, savoring each other in words that filled my mind with joy in seeing their relationship grow. I knew that it was a short story, but it could really use double the words to be a little slower and more fulfilling for me, the reader.
Also, I saw some grammar errors and a typo. Some of it I could perhaps excuse to the possible personalities of the characters, but I would rather have good grammar or know that the people do not use good grammar and the author is reflecting their ways. Alas, I did not know, for the above reason, shortness of the story.
I was glad that the hero did not use his alpha nature in an abusive way toward her, as can happen so easily, in stories and real life. Protective ways can easily be taken too far. When I see powerful, intense possession of one by another, I have a concern. Perhaps have the hero be a little less alpha?
But, all that said, it was still a fun book to read. I enjoy this author and how the story was constructed, easily a realistic scenario.
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