- File Size: 230 KB
- Print Length: 15 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publisher: eXplicitTales (March 30, 2015)
- Publication Date: March 30, 2015
- Sold by: Amazon Digital Services LLC
- Language: English
- ASIN: B00VG97RNM
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Lending: Enabled
- Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #10,904 Free in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Free in Kindle Store)
|Digital List Price:||$2.99|
Save $2.99 (100%)
Taking the Team: An explicit hotwife group menage (eXplicitTales: Group Fun Book 1) Kindle Edition
|New from||Used from|
Try Kindle Countdown Deals
Explore limited-time discounted eBooks. Learn more.
Enter your mobile number or email address below and we'll send you a link to download the free Kindle App. Then you can start reading Kindle books on your smartphone, tablet, or computer - no Kindle device required.
To get the free app, enter your mobile phone number.
What other items do customers buy after viewing this item?
Would you like to tell us about a lower price?
Top customer reviews
There was a problem filtering reviews right now. Please try again later.
Story is a gang--bang/"group menage" where the woman volunteered to take on entire (English football - American soccer) team. She enjoys the degradation (says so in the story). ... And story isn't quite the right word: no character development, no plot, no conflict, no resolution, and ... well, the setting is described better than the sex which only described the actions, not the feelings (talking about touch and tingle, don't care about emotions in a piece like this). Erotica requires a story, and this story doesn't have a story.
Gets a star for describing the locker room and bar settings well. A second star for describing the character motivations and making you believe the main characters motivations and relationship with boyfriend. And that is all "Taking the Team" has going for it. Need more touch&tingle to be good reading p. o. r. n..
The story had a tantalizing premise and that is about all. Why did the protagonist act so? her husband and friends? nothing makes us wonder, or tells us.
If the author spent sometime teasing us with why and how proposal was set, we could have been participants not a computer reading words with no meaning.
There was one trade that prevented me from giving this a zero. When events unfold she wonders if it's a one time deal. If a follow-up awaits, tell us motivations with various characters, differences and how she rationalized all. That would be worthy of reading.
This one skip!