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Great story but would have been 5 stars
on January 17, 2016
Had this actually been edited correctly. I did see where the author thanks her editor in the forward. Well Author, I'm really sorry to say your editor is not doing her job or she hasn't a clue. I actually highlighted and made a digital note on the problems as I found them when I read this book. There were a good handful at least. I can forgive a couple but this was too many. Now the last book was a lot worse but still, if you have hired an editor then you need to fire her and ask for a refund. If you would like to see the notes I'd be happy to give them to you. Really this series is wonderful! It could, I believe be a best seller in print, not just digital, if it were edited.
I know a lot of people won't bother to read Indy books if they have any reviews with bad editing. So right there your losing customers.
Now about the actual book. I liked the play between the two main Characters in this book, as I did in the two proceeding books. The stories are exciting, fast paced and never boring and all three kept me up reading past my bed time. I read a lot of books and very few actually do that. I love how she can make you really feel like you know the people in these books and how you get to keep up on people from proceeding books. I also love how she ties up most everything so your not hanging but leaves one thing open for the next book... ok two things in this one.
I think this writer has a lot of promise and I look forward to her other books too. But please get a real editor! One who actually reads the books carefully so they catch everything.