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Talon of the Unnamed Goddess, a Fantasy Adventure by [Daems, C. R.]
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Length: 231 pages Word Wise: Enabled Enhanced Typesetting: Enabled
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There was a lot to like about it: a beautiful and original fantasy world,  a great main character, and a solid plot.  -Brewster's Bookshelf

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  • File Size: 1195 KB
  • Print Length: 231 pages
  • Page Numbers Source ISBN: 1463662394
  • Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
  • Publisher: Talon Novels; 3 edition (June 24, 2011)
  • Publication Date: June 24, 2011
  • Sold by: Amazon Digital Services LLC
  • Language: English
  • ASIN: B00580V7YU
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  • Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #298,851 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
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By W. B. Kamffer on August 26, 2011
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Talon of the Unnamed Goddess is a fantasy adventure tale with much to recommend it, but which, in my opinion, ultimately falls short of fulfilling its potential.

The story follows a young woman named Aisha Talon who has undergone special training to become one of the Talon assassins/warriors/bodyguards/hired-knives. But we quickly learn that it is not because of Aisha's fighting prowess that she has successfully completed her training, for though she fights very well, it is her calculating mind that sees her through, as she constantly out-wits her opponents. We see this side of Aisha early on as she completes her training, and the authors utilize this ability of hers repeatedly throughout the book to solve various problems.

Fresh out of training, Aisha is assigned as the chaperone/bodyguard of a princess, and in an ensuing coup, the princess Rhiannon escapes with Aisha, and thus begins the quest to reclaim her throne. I suppose one could properly describe the book as a war story, as civil war is essentially at the heart of the matter, and there are very few chapters that do not center on the fighting. Rhiannon, under Aisha's guidance, learns to make alliances, make contracts with the Talons, twist arms to get what she wants, and win the people's support in the war.

Firstly, let me begin my review by talking about the magic system, as this is a fantasy. Magic revolves around a series of six sigils that impart powers such as warrior skills, lie detection, illusion, healing, and two others I can't now recall. But there is a seventh sigil, one that nobody has ever possessed before because the goddess granting it has never allowed the sigil to "take" to a man or woman. Until Aisha. She gains the power of negation, and keeps it a secret to hide her advantage.
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I thought the main points of the story and plot were excellent ideas: the main character succeeding through wits rather than brute strength, the original concept of magic "sigils" enhancing people's power, and the role of the raptor clan in the society made for a great start to the book. Unfortunately the book has too many editing issues and some secondary plot points that really detract from the story.

While the ideas in this story are wonderful, their execution is lacking. I noticed many times where the verb tenses were incorrect, as well as pronouns (they versus us) being used incorrectly, as though the author had lost their train of thought while writing and didn't catch the mistake in proof-reading the story. The dialogue was also a bit awkward in spots and needed to be a little more concise, even though the vocabulary of the book is appropriately complex. Also, toward the end of the book a character is described as "whining" when they have only ever shown strength and courage.

The other thing lacking was character development and plot twists. The main character, Aisha, is well developed, though she doesn't grow or change during the story. The girl she is charged with protecting, pri'Rhiannon develops more as a character than the hero of the story. Aisha also succeeds far too often, I can only recall one failure on her part during the entire story, and even that was worked out with little trouble, so there were no surprising or unexpected plot twists. The love story between Aisha and another character is unnecessary and not developed at all. One moment she is focused on fighting and duty, the next she is madly in love without ever really getting to know her love interest at all, or even spending more than a day with him.
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By Alexis on January 2, 2014
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So this story is about Aisha Talon. She is a new Talon which are a type of warrior/assassin and they get some kind of power/magic kind of in the form of sigils. Well Aisha doesn't receive one of them but instead can make any type of sigil not work. We follow Aisha as she graduates the Aerie and gets her first assignment as a bodyguard/chaperon to Rhiannon the heir to a throne.
As the story continues we follow the growth of both Rhiannon as she becomes a young ruler and the growth of Aisha as a Talon who turns advisor and friend. We watch her struggle with the emotions the Talons frown upon and we see her turn into a woman.
This was a very enjoyable story with a little bit of some slow parts as we see battle plans because they are at war. But all in all it is a new story, a refreshing take on the whole underdog tale. It is pretty enjoyable where we can imagine these characters as real people. I would not have been disappointed if I had purchased this book instead of getting it free on Amazon.
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This is an exceptional book. It not only tells a fascinating story, but demonstrates intriguing guerrilla tactics in the "shadow war" initiated by the protagonist. A strong, well trained woman has the courage to actually believe her trainers and carry out a strategy which is largely theoretical. Because she is inexperienced, she is unaware that this strategy has seldom been used before. To her all strategies are similarly theoretical, so she picks the one that appears to have the most chance of success.

I have to laugh, though, at authors who use medieval-sounding words without bothering to pick up a dictionary and see what they actually mean. In one place these authors have an army of 200 camping in the wilderness, and their camp is a square which is a league on a side. A league is three miles. These 200 soldiers are occupying nine square miles. Now, in western Kansas, a wheat field is usually 40 acres, so there are 144 of them in nine square miles. Two out of every three soldiers in this army have an entire wheat field to himself and only about a third of them have to share. I live in Kansas City, Missouri at about 3500 south and 1200 east. So a league goes from my house to the river in the north, and, since the state line is 400 west, it goes 20 blocks into Kansas to the west from my house. So a square league encompasses all of downtown Kansas City, Missouri, all of downtown Kansas City, Kansas, and ten blocks of residential area on the Kansas side. 200 people could wander around in that area for days without ever seeing each other. Even if they used the smallest league in history, the Roman league, which is only a mile and a half long, this is too much territory for 200 soldiers. That's still 2 and a quarter square miles, some 1600 acres.
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