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This book needs a better editor in a major way. The author acknowledges an editor in the back of her book and I am absolutely shocked by that. The grammar was pretty awful. Subject/verb agreement (that's basic English!) was no good and the author couldn't decide from one paragraph to the next whether she was writing in present tense or past tense. I'm not sure what happened there, but an editor worth anything should've corrected every single one of those. An editor also should've taken steps to correct the flow of the novel, which was choppy and sometimes just aimless.
The storyline was predictable, almost from the beginning of the book and the climax of the storyline was way out in left field. I feel like it could've worked, but only if the author had built up to it a little more and spent a little more time on it when it happened. Crazy things like that happen in books, but this was not done well. The author had a good story. She had a good plot with some good twists. I feel that a good editor could've helped this book along, but as it stands, its a one star.
The single most problematic area for me was by far the editing. Had it not been clearly indicated on the sales page that this book did in fact have a separate editor, I would have assumed that the author threw this into spell check, then uploaded a rough draft. And if she had done this, given this being her introduction to publishing, I would have forgiven her for her excitement. But clearly she had an editor, and beta readers, who all missed significant problems with this manuscript. Paragraph structure, missing words, incorrect punctuation, redundancies, improper verb tenses - all of these issues are seen throughout. I know mistakes happen and I don't expect perfection, but this was the most unpolished book I have read in recent memory. And I read a lot of books.
The story idea itself was not particularly original, which in and of itself is not an issue. But I want to feel the author's unique spin on things, and it wasn't here for me. I felt like I had read something like this before, and it just didn't captivate me like I wanted it to.
For all the references to Michigan, I felt like the only takeaway from this was that the state is extremely cold. If a couple slight mentions of Detroit had not been made, this could have easily been Wisconsin or Minnesota, because they are cold up there too. If an author is so prone to mention location time and again, I want an aside that shows me why. Not just proof that you can name one professional sports team there.Read more ›
Most Recent Customer Reviews
Josie Wright was a new to me author and I'm so excited that I found her!! That One Night is Ben and Frankie's story told through Frankie's POV. Read morePublished 1 month ago by Kristin Marvin
That One Night is the debut book by Josie Wright. I was hooked right from the beginning. Frankie is a strong person and it shows throughout the book. Read morePublished 1 month ago by Diana's Book Reviews
I read this book through Kindle Unlimited. This is a second chance story for Ben and Frankie. Ben is Frankies brothers best friend. Read morePublished 2 months ago by D. Burgamy
In love with older brother's best friend? Check.
Second chance romance? Check.
Unexpected pregnancy? Check.
Single mom for a while? Check. Read more
I loved this book for so many reasons but most of all because it made me feel such a plethora of emotions. At times I was laughing so hard I almost peed my pants. Lol. Read morePublished 2 months ago by Amazon Customer
I most amazing story the made my emotions go up and down throughout the whole novel. I fell in love with their romantic love story. This book had everything I ever want in a book. Read morePublished 2 months ago
This was one powerful story.
Frankie and Ben knew each other since they were kids and Frankie had a crush on Ben since forever.
They finally spent One night together.. Read more
It was okay. I have conflicting feelings about the Hero, I didn't like how he dealt with his problems in the beginning of the book but when it came to stepping up, he did that big... Read morePublished 2 months ago by Ashley M.