Top critical review
on July 24, 2015
I love reading post apocalyptic dystopian type of books (check my threading history :D ) and with this book I found I liked it not loved. The author could of made this book Sooooo much more than she did. I get they have a colony in the ocean all over the world. She wants to leave ok. But to leave u have to get ur tongue cut out by your own mother I must add which she don't relize it even tho the author basically spelled it out say in she had tears in her eye, eyes that look familiar. Same skin color as my sister.... and later her other daughter comes up and she gets her head shaved?!?!?! Wtf is that? Also if u get ur tongue cut out u can only eat fluids and soft food not energy bars! I like reading books that seem REAL I can care less if they were living in the center of the earth but something like what happens if u cut out your tongue is very simple research that would of made the book that much better. But other than that Idk it was good. The ending with her sister say in she can come back? like hey dad I got no tongue, how are you going to explain that? Makes no sense but the character development was ok. Found she could of done a lot more that underwater, school house, supply run, hunting, leaving...the end. And she would of made it more factual with the things she did right. Hope others enjoy it.