- File Size: 3135 KB
- Print Length: 284 pages
- Publisher: Twisted Ink, LLC; 1 edition (May 7, 2018)
- Publication Date: May 7, 2018
- Sold by: Amazon Digital Services LLC
- Language: English
- ASIN: B07CR2ZB57
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Lending: Enabled
- Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #812,106 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
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Their Unexpected Mate (Paranormal Protection Unit Book 1) Kindle Edition
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I loved this storyline, the idea behind this book was amazing. The characters had depth. So why did I go three star rating. Well the perspective of story kept changing throughout. For example it would be written in third person but from one of the guys perspective and suddenly a paragraph would switch to her perspective and then back to one of guys. There was also a bit mid story that was written in the “bad guys” perspective. The other main issue I had was an over use of pet names. When the ménage were interacting with each other the sentences didn’t feel natural. In a couple of instances it felt like the pet names were just put into the sentence for no reason. And sometime multiple different pet names in one sentence.
That being said, the world built and the storyline have the potential to become an amazing read. A few tweaks would easily see this story going from a three star read to a five.