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Through the Third Eye: Book 1 of Third Eye Trilogy Paperback – August 3, 2011
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My problem was with the character's and especially their dialog. It often seemed forced and the randomness of the adjectives left me with a feeling that the author was trying too hard to make me like them. And Clay often seemed as if he was totally oblivious to the dangers around him. After numerous attempts to kill him and destroy the treasure he had been searching after for years he acts as if being in the U.S.A. made all that a thing of the past. One minute he is intelligent and insightful and the next he is clueless.
I think the author could use a good editor to review and help him overcome some of these problems. Again, I liked the story, I liked the plot. I'm just not crazy about the main characters. I want to be, maybe I'll like them better in the second book.