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Touch of Light: A Baylee Scott Paranormal Mystery (The Reed Hollow Chronicles Book 1) Kindle Edition
- ASIN : B01M26FXID
- Publication date : January 17, 2017
- Language : English
- File size : 584 KB
- Simultaneous device usage : Unlimited
- Text-to-Speech : Enabled
- Enhanced typesetting : Enabled
- X-Ray : Not Enabled
- Word Wise : Enabled
- Print length : 236 pages
- Lending : Enabled
- Best Sellers Rank: #657,281 in Kindle Store (See Top 100 in Kindle Store)
- Customer Reviews:
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The reason I point these errors out is that correct grammar distinguishes a superior writer from an average one. I think the author has the potential for greater writing, if she can address some of these not so minor issues. Good luck!! Thanks for the opportunity to sample your work.
this book needs an editor.
Full of things, like the heroine saying "Indeed." Often.
And then there are the hyphenated words that don't need hyphens.
Like: My ringed-hand lifted.... should be ringed hand lifted. Of course, the wording is odd in the first place, so maybe even rephrase this.
The problem of starting sentences with words that do not need to be followed by a comma, yet they are: And, But, Then,
This is just my pet peeve but why are cosy writers always using the verb "exit."
"Then he exited through the solarium door." What's wrong with "left"? It's cop jargon should not be in a book unless it's in a quotation from a cop.
It read a bit slowly now and then. There were still some smaller mysteries that didn't get solved. The ending seemed just a little rushed. But I did like all of the characters, and I think that this town and its characters hold a lot of potential for upcoming books. YA appropriate, no strong language or sexual scenes.
Top reviews from other countries
Well written, a very good story, some excellent characters and a good balance between light and dark which heralds well for the next in the series. Despite Alex not being able to make scones, this is highly recommended.
Oh, and don't try to pet Mr B.
I loved the characters and the story line so much and I wish that I had read this book before now. Really really impressed and loved the way that this author wrote this book!
Definite 5* rating and highly recommend it
A good story of Witches and non witches.
Interesting and kept you reading to see who and what was happening to characters in story. Thought it it good with mother who had passed was always beside daughter and always there with an as answer.
Well worth reading.
Für mich wird es kein weiteres Buch dieser Autorin geben. Irgendwelche Alien- und UFO Ablenkungen zu starten, machte das Buch einfach noch schlechter. Magie, Geister oder Hexen. Es wird nur an der Oberfläche gekratzt. Die Beziehungen zwischen den Charakteren lassen mich genauso kalt wie die Charaktere an sich. Der Hauptcharakter ist nahezu unsympathisch. Ich würde gerne irgendeinen positiven Aspekt finden, aber da ist leider ein großes dunkles Nichts. Sorry, nicht zu empfehlen. Im Gegenteil.