|Print List Price:||$13.99|
Save $9.00 (64%)
The Transition Witness: Book 1-Breathe (A Metaphysical/Visionary Science Fiction Adventure) Kindle Edition
|New from||Used from|
Getting the download link through email is temporarily not available. Please check back later.
To get the free app, enter your mobile phone number.
Customers Who Viewed This Item Also Viewed
Top Customer Reviews
Teresa Tsalaky did a decent job of creating and unfolding a future civilization different from what we are used to seeing in contemporary Sci Fi. Using vivid narrative, creative prose and multidimensional characters, Tsalaky tells a story of hope, discovery and change.
The characters grew on me as I continued to read, as should be the case. Tsalaky even managed to turn a river into a character. I was intrigued as I watched the changes in their situations and internal struggles. I am curious to see how Gemini ends up.
My chief issues were the occasional mixing of POV which caused me some confusion at times. The other was that while her ability to write brilliant prose is a fantastic talent, there where times when the prose slowed the story. I found myself skipping through certain areas to get back to the action.
Lastly, I found that there was something missing from this story and after a while, I felt that it was passion. Maybe I was expecting something which the author wasn't intending. There seemed to be a lot of her philosophy heavily woven throughout. While I do understand that authors include their own ideologies, I did think it was a bit overdone here.
I am interested in reading the 2nd installment in this trilogy.
Take DC-1128, for example. She hates her job. Every day she must witness the deaths of those who have reached their fiftieth year. Once dead, their bodies will be recycled for the good of her society. Her society, however, may have material goods, but it suffers dullness and a poverty of spirit. DC-1128 lives in an artificial world because the outside is reputed to be incapable of supporting life, having been ruined through greed and war. Is it really true? She doesn't know. Nevertheless she and her friends want something more, and they will fight for it. As a first step toward rebellion, DC escapes with one of the 50-year-olds to the outside, where they are surprised to find a thriving natural world with a happy and intelligent populace. There, individuals practice sustainability and seek psychic development and fulfillment, important ingredients in this tale.
Tsalaky takes us into a plausible future that is both frightening and inspiring. The story is prophetic, for we see the struggle in our world between self-destruction and sustainability. What future will we choose?
Several individuals share the spotlight, but at the story's end, when they find their peace, the spotlight shifts through an open door onto those whose futures are unresolved, and we will follow them in a sequel. Questions accompany us through that open door, which we hope will be answered in the next book. Will Ari surrender to death? How will Gemini, Finn, and Orion survive? Will blue stones play a role in the story? What will be the effect of a broken treaty?
Tense, at times scary, the story grabs you and doesn't let go.
As I read further, it grew increasingly clear what that missing element was: what I was reading was more of a description of a story than the story itself. It struck me as ironic that author Teresa Tsalaky has her characters speak at length about the life force that binds us all together, and yet she has, in my opinion, failed to breathe the force of life into her novel itself.
To me, the greatest strength of the novel was the passion of the author herself, but in my view – once again - that passion did not manifest itself in the characters and events, which were depicted in what to me was a disconcertingly detached way – as through a glass dully, if you will.
As a non-fiction book on spirituality, I might judge the results differently, because there is a lot to like in it. But this is a novel, and its prime directive is to tell a story, not describe a philosophy. If the author cannot find a way to breathe *fire* into her characters and their lives, then I fear for the fate of her series. I suspect she has the fire within herself; she just has to find a way to release it.
Gemini (who supposedly will be the protagonist in the second book), is such a vivid character that she should attract a YA audience. Finn is so lovable that you'll want to bring him home. And you just want to bonk Darby over the head.
The story is about love, desire, ambition and pride. We are shown how these things mold the characters' destinies. It's also about friendship, sacrifice and trust.
The plot is very engaging. It made me laugh and cry and curse and stomp. When I cried at the end, it was tears of both joy and sorrow – sorrow for what DC had lost, and joy for what she had become. After the last page, I sat in my chair with eyes closed wanting to stay in that world for just a bit longer.
Thank you, Teresa Tsalaky, for giving us a fresh, new voice in science fiction.
Most Recent Customer Reviews
This is a fun sci-fi adventure with no pauses. The culture clash clearly described is also a personal struggle we all have trying to make sense in a chaotic and confusing world. Read morePublished 17 months ago by Christopher Aune
I got this book honestly for a giveaway. Now this book brought me to my knees and humbled me because I really enjoyed reading it, and forgot all about the giveaway.. Read morePublished 24 months ago by mkittysamom
“The Transition Witness” was a very interesting read, blending commentary on human history and the possible (probable?) human future. Read morePublished 24 months ago by Amazon Customer
I read The Transition Witness a couple of weeks ago, and I'm only finally getting around to reviewing it because it has been stewing in my head. Read morePublished 24 months ago by Rachel B
From when I started reading the first chapter I felt like I could "live" step-by-step with the main character as the story progressed, that I wasn't left to my own devices... Read morePublished 24 months ago by MamiS
This book got me so involved right from the start. I really couldn't put it down. It really makes you think of the unthinkable and wonder what could happen in another future. Read morePublished 24 months ago by misti911
After a worldwide revolution, politicians begin controlling even the deaths of the residents of the dodecahedron - the large sphere they all live inside of - so a "transition... Read morePublished on July 22, 2014 by Caliquail
The book is well written without most of the mistakes found in SPA books. As a baby boomer I would label this as New Age philosophy couched in a science fiction/post apocalypse... Read morePublished on July 19, 2014 by S. Morris
This story really sucked me in, I couldn't stop reading it. I found myself crying, laughing and angry. Read morePublished on July 18, 2014 by Amazon Customer
Set up an Amazon Giveaway
What Other Items Do Customers Buy After Viewing This Item?
Look for Similar Items by Category
- Books > Literature & Fiction > Genre Fiction > Metaphysical & Visionary
- Books > Science Fiction & Fantasy > Science Fiction > Dystopian
- Kindle Store > Kindle eBooks > Literature & Fiction > Genre Fiction > Metaphysical
- Kindle Store > Kindle eBooks > Religion & Spirituality > Occult > Metaphysical Phenomena
- Kindle Store > Kindle eBooks > Science Fiction & Fantasy > Science Fiction > Dystopian