
Amazon Prime Free Trial
FREE Delivery is available to Prime members. To join, select "Try Amazon Prime and start saving today with FREE Delivery" below the Add to Cart button and confirm your Prime free trial.
Amazon Prime members enjoy:- Cardmembers earn 5% Back at Amazon.com with a Prime Credit Card.
- Unlimited FREE Prime delivery
- Streaming of thousands of movies and TV shows with limited ads on Prime Video.
- A Kindle book to borrow for free each month - with no due dates
- Listen to over 2 million songs and hundreds of playlists
Important: Your credit card will NOT be charged when you start your free trial or if you cancel during the trial period. If you're happy with Amazon Prime, do nothing. At the end of the free trial, your membership will automatically upgrade to a monthly membership.
Buy new:
$8.99$8.99
Ships from: Amazon.com Sold by: Amazon.com
Save with Used - Good
$6.18$6.18
FREE delivery January 8 - 14
Ships from: Zoom Books Company Sold by: Zoom Books Company
Download the free Kindle app and start reading Kindle books instantly on your smartphone, tablet, or computer - no Kindle device required.
Read instantly on your browser with Kindle for Web.
Using your mobile phone camera - scan the code below and download the Kindle app.
Troubled Waters (An Elemental Blessings Novel) Mass Market Paperback – September 27, 2011
Purchase options and add-ons
- Print length416 pages
- LanguageEnglish
- PublisherAce
- Publication dateSeptember 27, 2011
- Dimensions4.33 x 1.05 x 6.8 inches
- ISBN-100441020895
- ISBN-13978-0441020898
Book recommendations, author interviews, editors' picks, and more. Read it now.
Frequently bought together

Customers who viewed this item also viewed
Summers at Castle AuburnMass Market Paperback
Editorial Reviews
About the Author
Excerpt. © Reprinted by permission. All rights reserved.
Navarr Ardelay's body was laid to rest in a blazing pyre, as befit a sweela man who owed his allegiance to flame. Zoe stood numbly within the circle of mourners, unable to speak, as she watched her father burn away to ashes. Even as he had wasted away for this past quintile, growing thinner, more frail, uncharacteristically querulous with pain, she hadn't really believed he would die. How could there be a world in which Navarr Ardelay did not exist?
She was so cold that not even the leaping flames could chase away her chill; the weak winter sunlight offered no warmth at all. Doman hovered close, his hand always half-outstretched. Zoe wondered if he thought to catch her when she fainted or to yank her back if she attempted to throw herself into the fire. Doman was the unofficial leader of this little village; he made himself responsible for the well-being of every soul in the small cluster of houses, and he had been tireless in his efforts to ease Navarr's passage out of this life. He had even sent to Chialto for surprisingly effective medicines that would soothe pain and keep the mind clear. Navarr had been awake and lucid as recently as two days ago, continuing to dictate to Zoe how he wanted her to distribute his few items of any worth.
"Doman must have anything he wants from the house, of course," her father had said late that night. "He will probably choose my desk or fountain."
That had caused Zoe to look up in surprise. "ButI want to keep both of those."
Navarr had lain back against the pillows, his face thin and drawn, his body weak, but his mind, as always, working working working. "It will be too much trouble to transport them."
She was even more surprised. "I'm not going anywhere."
His eyes were closed. "Of course you are. It is time you remembered that you are part of your mother's family as well."
She had not bothered to answer that because, as soon as he spoke the words, he was asleep again.
And because she was too astonished.
He spoke of her mother rarely, and her mother's family not at all. He blamed the powerful Lalindar clan for his fall from grace ten years ago, for the long years of exile and poverty. Zoe didn't even know if her grandmother was still alive, and which of her aunts or uncles or cousins would have inherited Christara Lalindar's title and property if the old woman was dead. Not that she cared. She would not be seeking any of them out, even if the unthinkable happened. Even if her father died. She doubted if any of them remembered her more clearly than she remembered themor thought of her more often.
This village was her home now, this house the place where she belonged. She already knew, as her father lay there so quietly, that the tiny house would seem enormous once his spirit had flown it. She did not know how she could possibly fill its entire vast emptiness with her own limp and tired soul.
Zoe would have thought her father's body would sustain any flame for a quintile at leasthis swift, questing, inexhaustible mind should have been fuel for a nineday all by itselfbut in fact the fire began to die down sooner than she would have thought possible. Most of the villagers had lingered for about fifteen minutes and then drifted away, although three women who had been in love with Navarr at various times still stood weeping around the pyre. Zoe herself was prepared to stand here watching until her legs buckled under her, and then she planned to kneel before the fading embers until the world itself ended.
But Doman would have none of that. He put his hand on her shoulder, avuncular, insistent. "Come inside now," he said, nudging her away from the circle of stones, back toward the stand of houses. "The fire is almost out. It is time to go in."
"Not yet," she said, planting her feet.
He turned his free hand palm up. "It has started to rain," he said. So far the drops were thin and misty, hardly an inconvenience, but the pale sunlight had been blocked out by a slowly building mass of heavy gray clouds, and the air felt like it was gathering itself for a tantrum. "Your father would not want you to be drenched in the tears of the world for his sake."
Since this was true, she allowed him to turn her away from the pyre and lead her to her small, sad, utterly abandoned house.
Together they stepped into the kierten, the tiny room set just inside the door. In great houses, Zoe knew, a kierten might be enormousa huge, echoing chamber big enough to accommodate fifty people. A kierten was always completely empty; it was a homeowner's way of saying he was so wealthy he could afford to waste space. Poor villagers could not make such a boast, of course, but none of them were so destitute that they did not have a kierten at their front doors.
Doman stepped into the main room right behind Zoe, and she glanced swiftly around to see the place through his eyes. She hadn't had much time to clean up the detritus of death, so the room was predictably messy. Bed linens were balled up on the floor, clothes and dishes were scattered across various surfaces, and books and papers were stacked in haphazard piles wherever she had tried to get them out of the way. A faint odor of rotting food drifted in from the only other room in the housethe small narrow kitchen that doubled as Zoe's bedroom. She hadn't had time to take her trash to the composting field for at least four days, perhaps longer.
"Would you like me to send Miela over to help you?" Doman asked. "You know she is a reasonably organized woman."
It was a small joke, but Zoe found herself incapable of smiling. Doman's wife was magnificently capable. She had raised ten children and served as a great maternal presence to everyone in the village, even Zoe's father, who had been the last man in the world in need of mothering.
"Thank you, no," Zoe said, speaking with an effort. "If I have something to occupy my hands, perhaps my heart won't hurt quite so much."
"You must come and spend the night with us, of course," he said.
Zoe shook her head. "No. Thank you, but no."
"Then Miela will come here to sleep."
She shook her head again, but it was reflex. She knew if Doman decided she should not be alone tonight, one way or the other, she would not be alone. Doman was all hunti, all wood, stubborn and immovable. It did not matter how much you leaned against Doman, how many burdens you piled on him; he would not change and he would not break.
The rain had started to fall with a bleak and heavy steadiness; it was the kind of rain that could go on for days. Even less light spilled in through the small, high windows of frosted glass, so Zoe stepped over a pile of soiled clothing to light a lamp. Instantly the clutter of the room was even more visible.
She made an indeterminate gesture to indicate the whole room. "My father wanted you to pick something to remember him by," she said. "Anything in the entire house."
It was a common enough tradition, a way for the living to remember the dead. Doman must have realized that he had been given the supreme honor of being the first to choose among Navarr's possessions, for he nodded once, suitably solemn. He was a tall man, thin and sinewy, with brown-bark skin and thick gray hair, and the colorful overrobe he had worn to the funeral made him look like some kind of oracle.
"I am happy to bring a piece of Navarr Ardelay into my own home," Doman said. "But I wouldn't want to take anything that you held especially dear."
"The things I want to keep I have already moved into my room," she said. "Take what you like."
Doman glanced at the carved deska huge, ungainly piece of furniture, bought five years ago from a peddler selling a strange assortment of quality merchandise from the back of his wagon. Next he studied the bronze fountain, a miniature replica of the one that played in the kierten of the royal palace. But then he stepped toward the back wall and pointed at the three pieces hanging over the rumpled bed.
"I would take the random blessings, if you could stand the loss," he said.
For the first time in four days, Zoe almost smiled. "Doman," she said. "Your trait is wood. And you covet the blessings of a man of fire?"
He indicated the first item hanging on the wall. It was a square of hammered copper, perhaps five by five inches, with the symbol for courage embossed in it from behind. He had no trouble summoning a smile. "That is a blessing that should fall on a hunti man," he said.
"True enough," she said.
"And endurance is a blessing for a torz woman, and Miela is certainly that," Doman added.
The symbol for endurance was the most beautiful of the three blessings, embroidered in shades of blue on a crisp white background and contained in a frame of carved wood. "Yes, I know Miela has always liked that piece," Zoe said.
Doman gestured at the third blessing, a stylized symbol vividly painted onto a long narrow bolt of stretched canvas. "And who could not use triumph in his life?" he asked. "I shall be the envy of everyone in the village."
Triumph was the rarest of the extraordinary blessingseveryone knew thatand Navarr had always considered it exquisitely ironic that it had been one of the gifts bestowed upon him at birth. Or perhaps the irony had only become clear to him during those last ten years of his life. Certainly, when he was younger, when he lived in Chialto and had the ear of King Vernon, he had been considered one of the most successful men of his generation. Maybe different blessings exerted their power at different points in a person's life, Zoe thought. Triumph had governed Navarr's existence for twenty or thirty years, but it had given way to endurance at the end. Zoe supposed that there had been times during his political career when her father had displayed great courage; thus, in their way, as they always did, the three blessings had proved themselves to be true.
"I will be happy to think his blessings are now blessing you," Zoe said formally.
Doman turned to give her a sober inspection. "Although perhaps I should leave them behind to nurture you instead," he replied.
Zoe shook her head. "I will draw strength from my own blessings," she said, extending her left hand and giving a slight shake to the silver bracelet that held three charms.
"Beauty, love, and power," Doman said, for of course he had seen the blessings dangling from her wrist every day of the past ten years. "At least one has been true your whole life. Love and power will surely come."
"Surely," Zoe echoed, though she had never believed it. In fact, she knew the first blessing wasn't true, either. She was tall, thin, and serious, with straight black hair, fierce black eyes, and faintly olive skin that quickly tanned dark in the early days of summer. If she had had to pick an elay trait that described her, she thought she would have claimed honor instead. But no one had any say in their own random blessings.
"When shall I send Miela to come help you?" Doman asked.
Zoe glanced around the room, at the piles of clothes and papers and general disarray. For a moment she could not imagine how the whole mess could be reorganized into something tidy and respectable and bearable. She could not imagine how to restructure the house into a place she could live in without her father.
"I don't know," she said, suddenly too weary to stand. "Later. An hour or two from now. I have to lie down. I have to sleep. Maybe it will all make sense when I wake up."
Doman crossed to her side and kissed her very gently on her forehead. "Perhaps not today when you wake up," he said. "And perhaps not tomorrow. But soon enough you will heal. It is the way of the world."
As soon as Doman was gone, Zoe curled up on her mat in the kitchen, but despite her exhaustion she remained awake for a long time. Idly, she played with the charms on her bracelet, fingering them one by one. She had always thought there could hardly have been three blessings that suited her less, but she cherished them anyway. Mostly because she loved the tale of how her father had sought them out, inebriated with happiness.
He had been so excited at her birthso the story wentthat he could barely wait for her to be five hours old before he rushed out into the crowded streets of Chialto, looking for likely strangers to bestow blessings on his newborn daughter. She had come squalling into the world shortly after midnight, so it was scarcely dawn when the clock struck that fifth hour, and the only people patrolling the street at that time were late drunks, early servants, and women who sold their favors. He had excitedly begged a token from someone in each category.
The cheerful, dizzy man, who had just stepped out of a tavern, fished in his pocket and pulled out a cheap blessing coin stamped with beauty. "It's the only kind I carry," he confided with a smile. "Every girl deserves to be beautiful."
The servant, a rushed and unsmiling woman of exceeding plainness, had dutifully stopped and dug through her bag and come up with a bent and dingy coin that held the glyph for love. "We can go to a temple if that's not one you like," she'd said, but Navarr had been delighted to think that his tiny little girl would receive so great a gift.
It was the prostitute, weary and young, who had fulfilled her role in the traditional way, accompanying Navarr to the nearest temple, where he paid the tithe for both of them to enter. They didn't waste time sitting in one of the five pews, inhaling the incense-heavy air and meditating themselves back into a state of balance. They just stepped up to the big, heavy barrel in the middle of the chamber and plunged their hands deep into its rich bounty of coins.
The prostitute had pulled up a token first. "One for your daughter," she said, and dropped it into Navarr's hand.
"Power," he had said, when he had identified the symbol by the murky light. He'd laughed. "It seems like such a heavy blessing for such a tiny creature!"
"Maybe it will suit her better when she is my age, or yours," she'd replied. She dipped into the barrel again, not as deeply this time, and pulled up a second token. "And one for me," she said. Her voice was wistful when she added, "Wealth. That would be nice."
Navarr pressed a few quint-golds into her hand. Random blessings were supposed to be freely given, and most people refused payment for the service, but this girl quickly pocketed her bounty. "Did you pull a coin for yourself?" she wanted to know.
He nodded and showed her. "Change," he said.
It was a coru trait. "Is your daughter born to a woman of blood, then?" she asked.
He was laughing again. "Yes, but this blessing is for me, I fear," he said. "An infant in the house changes everything, don't you think? I have been told that my life will never be the same."
"I hope you come to love her," the prostitute had said.
"I already do."
Zoe had heard this story so often she could recite it along with her father by the time she was five years old. Her mother had never seemed quite as amused by the part where Navarr and a woman of the streets searched the city together for a temple, but that was the point of random blessings: You were not supposed to show caution or discrimination about the people you approached. You were supposed to rely on the people who had been sent to you by the unchoreographed currents of the universe. You were supposed to understand that wisdom could be imparted by anyone, no matter how unexpected, that everyone had a gift to bestow.
Zoe squirmed on her mat and turned over to try for a more comfortable position. Everyone had a gift to bestow; everyone had a lifespan to complete; the world would change whether you wished it to or not. These were among the immutable truths that she could not alter by weeping. She closed her eyes and finally managed to summon a haunted and unsatisfactory sleep.
It was still raining a couple of hours later when Zoe woke up. As a woman born to a coru mother, the trait of blood and water, Zoe had always liked rain. She loved its many moods—from gentle and romantic to wild and unrestrained—and she loved the fresh, newly washed scent it always left behind. As a practical matter, rain was a welcome visitor here in the village, refilling cisterns and replenishing underground aquifers. Zoe was not the only one who loved the rain.
She pushed herself to her feet and then stood there a moment, trying to decide what to do. Caring for her father had taken up almost every waking moment for the past quintile, especially during the final days of his illness. What would she do now that she did not need to make his food, coax him to eat, and clean away the messes his body produced? Who would she speak to, now that that great restless mind had shut down? What purpose could she have to go on living?
Foolish thoughts. Her father would be distressed to think she considered her own existence so dependent on his. Zoe shook her head and forced herself to look around.
The kitchen was a mess. A long room with the cooking hearth tucked into the far right corner, it was so narrow that two people could barely pass each other to work. Next to the hearth were clustered all the implements used for cookingthe baking stones, the baskets and sealed crocks of ingredients, the pans and dishes. Near the far left corner of the room, Zoe had hung a gauzy purple curtain to create her own small private space. It held little more than a sleeping mat, a trunk of clothes, and a few useless but beloved treasures.
Now the mat was a tangle of bedsheets and discarded tunics Zoe had been too busy to wash. The kitchen held piles of dirty dishes and scraps of forgotten food. The floor had not been swept clean for days.
There was no purpose to Zoe's life, not now, but at least she could put it back into some kind of order.
So for the next two hours she began the slow, methodical repair of the small house. She made a pile of all the items that needed washing; she put fresh linens on her own bed, which would be used again, and her father's, which would not. She brought in a bucket of rainwater and scrubbed the kitchen, cleaned the dishes, wiped the floors, and even freshened up the kierten. She made the place habitable again, but it was hardly a home.
It was still raining at nightfall when Miela stepped in, careful not to track in mud. "I've cooked dinner and made up a bed for you in my daughter's old room," Miela said. The consummate tactician, Miela never bothered asking you to accede to her plans; she just told you what to do next. "Bring your nightclothes and come with me now."
So Zoe stuffed a few items in a bag and obediently followed Miela out into the wet night. Only when she felt the drops on her face did she realize she had been crying all afternoon. The tears were hot on her cheeks, but the rain was cool; it did not wash away any of her grief, only gave it a different temperature against her skin.
Miela worked with Zoe for the next two days to clean out the house. Zoe felt sometimes like a spinning doll set in motion by someone else's hand. If Miela had not been there to animate her, Zoe thought she might not have moved at all. Grief shrouded her thoughts and muffled her mind. She felt utterly blank. She could not even summon the energy to consider how long this state would last.
Miela, by contrast, was a bundle of competent bustle. A large woman, with broad hands and a wild aureole of curly gray hair, Miela projected calm and purpose, and both were equally soothing. At the same time, Miela kept up a steady stream of conversation that helped Zoe tether her consciousness to the physical world. Miela never asked Zoe for an opinion, she simply stated her decisions.
"You will not need all these clothes of your father's, so we will just set aside a few pieces for you to keep, and the rest we will give away…; Once you are living here by yourself, you will want to rearrange the furniture. I will have Doman and one of my sons move the desk, and you'll see how everything is opened up. You will move out of that corner in the kitchen. That will become a place for storage…; Perhaps we will buy you fabric and you can begin to sew. You have some skill with a needle, I think, or you would if you practiced enough."
Implicit in Miela's words was the notion of a future, which would require Zoe to think, to act, to support herself. Zoe couldn't imagine it, but she didn't have the strength to protest.
"My cousin's neighbor's son, he's about your age," Miela went on, neatly folding a pile of Navarr's trousers. "He has a house that's way too big for a man alone! Doman and I will invite him for dinner one night and you can see if you like him."
Miela had tried more than once to pair Zoe with some young man to whom she had a remote connection, but Zoe had never been much interested. Despite the love charm hanging from her bracelet, Zoe had never believed marriage and a settled existence were in her future. After a lifetime of conversation with her brilliant, erratic father, she could not imagine being satisfied with a simple man's dull observations on crops and the weather, no matter how kindhearted he was or how ambitious. So perhaps she should consider becoming a professional seamstress, after all. She should start thinking about what activities would inform the rest of her life.
"And there's a man in the next village, his wife died a year ago," Miela went on. "Older than you, but you might like that. You've never really been a young girl, even when you first arrived here. You were wise as an old woman even when you were thirteen. So maybe a mature man would suit you better."
Zoe didn't answer and Miela opened her mouth to make another observation. Then she paused and turned toward the door as if listening to someone step into the kierten. At first, all Zoe heard was the endless thrumming of the rain, but then she caught the foreign noises above that familiar soundheavy wheels, creaking wood, raised voices.
"A trader's caravan, traveling in this kind of weather?" Miela asked. "I'd have expected them to stay safe and dry in whatever town they'd found last. Let's go see what they have to offer."
She started toward the door, then stopped to look around appraisingly. "If they're looking for a place to bed down, this would not be a bad room to offer them," she said. "You could ask for a little extra coin if you made a meal for them as well. The back of a wagon gets mighty soggy in wet weather."
Zoe found the strength to protest. "I don't want a lot of strangers sleeping in my house."
"It might do you good," Miela said. "Give you something else to think about."
Zoe followed her through the kierten and out the front door, still protesting, but silently by now. If Miela thought Zoe should act as innkeeper for a group of itinerant merchants, innkeeper she would surely become.
But once they stepped outside into the chilly drizzle, it was clear this was no peddler's wagon come to seek shelter for the night.
All the inhabitants of the village had spilled out of their huts to stand in a ragged circle, staring at the vehicle that had arrived. It was the length of two ordinary wagons, made of a painted, polished wood that would not be out of place inside the king's courtyard, and its six wheels were enormous. Windows set into the polished walls were covered with painted blue shutters, shut against the rain just now. At the front of the vehicle, where an ordinary wagon would have a bench for the driver and a hitch for a team of horses, there was only a small, enclosed chamber. Two men sat inside it, looking out through panels of glass.
There were no horses. It was impossible to imagine what had powered the conveyance down the roads.
Or perhaps not. A faint unfamiliar odor emanated from the front of the vehicle, and a thin line of white smoke drifted between the small enclosed section and the huge back portion. Zoe's father had loved to read reports of inventions being tested in Chialto, and he had been fascinated by the self-propelled vehicles that were fueled by compressed gasses. Surely this contraption was one of those.
"Why don't they come out and tell us why they're here?" Miela murmured to Zoe as they all stared at the two men sitting in their enclosed bubble. The men stared back but made no move to disembark.
Zoe was watching the central panel of the larger cabin, where a door opened up and folded downward, so that its top edge rested on the ground. A shallow set of steps marched down the lowered door, and down this makeshift stairway a man slowly descended.
He was a little more than medium height, with black hair cropped very tight to control a renegade curl. His face was long, thin, and pale; his eyes were a sharp and restless gray. Everything he wore was blackleather shoes, silk trousers, silk tunic, and an unadorned wool overrobe that swept all the way to his ankles.
He looked like a walking manifestation of wealth and power.
He set his expensively shod foot into the mud of the road without seeming to notice, and his expressive eyes flicked from face to face. Zoe, still a pace behind Miela, instinctively drew back to conceal herself behind the other woman's ample form. Everyone else stood utterly motionless, utterly silent.
After considering the villagers for a moment, the man headed directly toward Doman. Zoe was impressed. That quickly he had assessed his entire audience and determined who might speak for the group.
He said, "My name is Darien Serlast, and I am looking for someone I believe lives in your village."
At the name Serlast, Zoe caught her breath. There were five great families in the country of Welcepowerful clans that for generations had amassed wealth, consolidated property, and advised royalty. Depending on the generation, depending on the king, different clusters of the Five Families had risen to greater prominence or fallen to disgrace. The Serlastsall of them hunti, all of them unyielding as wood and bonehad been among the favorites of the current king since before Zoe and her father fled Chialto.
The only person a Serlast could possibly be looking for was Navarr Ardelay.
"Too late," Zoe whispered, so quietly not even Miela could hear. "He is already dead." He could no longer be forgiven and reinstated, or condemned and executed. He was safe from the king's wrath, out of reach of the king's remorse.
Doman nodded gravely. He did not seem at all discomposed by the elegant visitor; he wore his usual somber dignity without unease. "Who are you looking for?"
Zoe braced herself to hear her father's name, and so she did not immediately recognize the name Darien Serlast actually spoke.
"Zoe Ardelay."
Slowly, as if she moved through a medium as sticky as mud, Miela turned to stare at Zoe. She even took a step sideways, so Zoe was no longer hidden by her body. Just as slowly, all the other villagers shifted in her direction, their eyes wide and blank, their faces slack. Only Doman did not bother to turn in her direction, but instead kept his gaze on the stranger's face.
"What do you want with her?" Doman asked.
Darien Serlast's restless gray eyes had noted where the crowd was staring, and now he too was focused on Zoe, standing alone and frozen in the muddy road. There was nothing at all to be read on his narrow face. "I must take her back to Chialto with me," he said, "so she can marry the king."
Product details
- Publisher : Ace; Reprint edition (September 27, 2011)
- Language : English
- Mass Market Paperback : 416 pages
- ISBN-10 : 0441020895
- ISBN-13 : 978-0441020898
- Item Weight : 8.2 ounces
- Dimensions : 4.33 x 1.05 x 6.8 inches
- Best Sellers Rank: #348,251 in Books (See Top 100 in Books)
- #2,002 in Historical Fantasy (Books)
- #6,350 in Romantic Fantasy (Books)
- #9,553 in Epic Fantasy (Books)
- Customer Reviews:
About the author

Sharon Shinn is a journalist who works for a trade magazine. Her first novel, The Shapechanger's Wife, was selected by Locus as the best first fantasy novel of 1995. She has won the William C. Crawford Award for Outstanding New Fantasy Writer, and was twice nominated for the John W. Campbell Award for Best New Writer. A graduate of Northwestern University, she has lived in the Midwest most of her life.
Customer reviews
Customer Reviews, including Product Star Ratings help customers to learn more about the product and decide whether it is the right product for them.
To calculate the overall star rating and percentage breakdown by star, we don’t use a simple average. Instead, our system considers things like how recent a review is and if the reviewer bought the item on Amazon. It also analyzed reviews to verify trustworthiness.
Learn more how customers reviews work on AmazonCustomers say
Customers find the book engaging with its rich drama and adventure. They praise the brilliant, strong characters and the author's ability to reveal them through action rather than incessant thinking. The book is described as a wonderful, entertaining read with interesting world-building and an easy-to-read style. Readers appreciate the well-written and detailed descriptions of the temples and self-understanding. Overall, the book is described as magical and enjoyable.
AI-generated from the text of customer reviews
Customers find the book engaging with its imaginative world and well-crafted fantasy elements. They appreciate the strong female characters and satisfying ending. The plot is straightforward with a romance between an Elemental woman.
"...There is no black & white characterisation.- The love affair is also understated: part of the story, without events having to evolve around it..." Read more
"...Still, a nice fluffy fantasy in a reasonable coherent, magical world...." Read more
"...The plot is relatively simple: The main character, Zoe Ardelay, begins the book in a grief-stricken haze due to her father's death...." Read more
"...Most of the other characters are well-drawn, and the plot has all the aspects one wants in a good read: unexpected adventures, good triumphing over..." Read more
Customers enjoy the brilliant characters and their development through action. They praise the author's skill in blending fantasy with romance and character development. The book features a strong female character and an engaging plot.
"...The characters in general: main as well as secondary characters are well drawn. There is no black & white characterisation.-..." Read more
"...'s world-building is rich and colorful, and even the cameo characters are lovingly described...." Read more
"...Most of the other characters are well-drawn, and the plot has all the aspects one wants in a good read: unexpected adventures, good triumphing over..." Read more
"...There are many fine characters, and a rich world in which to spin new plots...." Read more
Customers enjoy the book's readability. They find it entertaining with brilliant characters and a well-described world. The book is described as a great stand-alone novel that gives hope. Readers appreciate the well-written, interesting storyline that keeps them interested throughout.
"...She IS actually lovely, likeable & easy to relate to. She is not perfect & has no false humility about herself either...." Read more
"...Still, a nice fluffy fantasy in a reasonable coherent, magical world...." Read more
"...In short, this was an excellent book that caught me in just the correct mood for it...." Read more
"...ethical heroine and her 'trials & tribulations' make for enjoyable reading...." Read more
Customers find the world-building interesting and engaging. They appreciate the well-developed universe and characters. The cultural concept is original and adds to the story in a unique way.
"...simply & naturally without great fuss, pointless grandiosity & forced BIG revelations...." Read more
"Reasonably interesting world-building, but really, it's so cliche: the main character who initially seemed so disadvantaged turns out to be..." Read more
"...The world Shinn has created is interesting, logical, and evocative...." Read more
"...There is political intrigue, mystery, brilliant characters, an amazing and well-described world, a slow-building romance and so much more...." Read more
Customers enjoy the book's writing quality. They find it well-written and easy to read with imaginative word pictures that bring rich drama and adventure. The characters are likable and relatable, making it one of the author's finest works. The book itself is well-organized with information in the front and back. Overall, readers describe it as a fun and light read.
"...The author builds up her world slowly, but surely, with lovely, interesting & intriguing details of geography, religion, politics, social customs..." Read more
"...The fantasy components are imaginative and well-drawn, while still lying in comfortably familiar territory...." Read more
"...interest in the form of a reliable man, along with, as I said, very rich imagery and mystical or religious themes...." Read more
"...also the book itself was well put together and has information in the front and back of the book to help readers sort out the specifics of the..." Read more
Customers enjoy the book's detail. They appreciate the temples, blessings, and self-understanding. The heroine is intelligent and relatable. Readers enjoy the vivid world and plot. The alternate environments are convincing, and readers find the information in the front and back of the book helpful. Overall, the book creates an interesting, logical, and evocative fantasy world.
"...her world slowly, but surely, with lovely, interesting & intriguing details of geography, religion, politics, social customs without being over- or..." Read more
"...There was little swooning, and little agony of doubt. There was self-understanding, admiration, and clash of wills to match the clash of ideals...." Read more
"...Reading this was like being trapped in a dust cloud. There's too much detail and too little at the same time, not enough dialog and preternaturally..." Read more
"...She is a flawed, intelligent, ethical heroine and her 'trials & tribulations' make for enjoyable reading...." Read more
Customers find the book sweet, with a subtle romantic tone. They describe it as believable and flowery, with self-understanding and admiration.
"...There was self-understanding, admiration, and clash of wills to match the clash of ideals...." Read more
"...style, which is romantic and descriptive and sometimes oblique and flowery rather than filled with action...." Read more
"...it is without doubt there, and I feel it is believable - and also incredibly sweet...." Read more
"...Infinitely familiar, magical, subtly romantic, imaginative and oh so rare in the current fashion of urban/paranormal fantasy...." Read more
Customers find the book heartwarming and uplifting. They say the romance is subtle and makes them feel joy and happiness. It's described as a comfortable, almost soothing read that beautifully evokes grief and moving moments.
"...There was little swooning, and little agony of doubt...." Read more
"...you can relax when reading this book - meaning that it is not angst-filled...." Read more
"...Indeed I found the book as a whole a comfortable, almost soothing, read.The spoiler-averse should stop reading now......." Read more
"Great writing, characters and ploting! the romance was subtle and heart warming." Read more
Top reviews from the United States
There was a problem filtering reviews right now. Please try again later.
- Reviewed in the United States on April 22, 2017If you are looking for bloody wars on immense scales with mythical creatures of the apocalypse, sword fights, violent deaths, foul conspiracy, fast pacing - this may not be the book for you to read. But if you are open for a change, you may end up enjoying this novel.
The society of the Kingdom of Wence is built around the balance of the five natural elements with related character traits & blessings: water (blood), fire (mind), air (soul), earth (flesh), wood (bone) & people’s resonance to one them.
Besides the King, the country is ruled by five great families with a particular affinity to one of the elements, especially embodied in the heads (Primes) of the families: water (“coru”) - Family Lalindar, air (“eelay”) - Family Dochenza, fire (“sweela”) -Family Ardelay, earth (“torz”) – Family Frothen , wood (“hunti”) – Family Serlast.
The story is about Zoe Ardelay-Lalindar, how, instead of marrying the King as his 5th wife, she comes into power as the new Prime of the Lalindar (her mother’s) family, how she is growing up to / into her role and how she navigates the troubled waters of high society & court intrigue.
Things I loved:
- Sharon Shinn managed to “create” a story that flows simply & naturally without great fuss, pointless grandiosity & forced BIG revelations. Every detail seems to be in its place & fits naturally into the greater picture. She did indeed achieve BALANCE.
- The concept of the world building based on the 5 elements & loosely on numerology. The author builds up her world slowly, but surely, with lovely, interesting & intriguing details of geography, religion, politics, social customs without being over- or underwhelming.
- The magic, if it can be called magic at all, is understated. It is more like natural powers coming to characters in-synch with their intrinsic elements, with greater power being concentrated in the Primes of the 5 houses. It is an important feature, but not the actual drive behind the story.
- The heroine, Zoe: she is not your typical kickass one (not that I have anything against them in general), but still has a solid inner strength to her in perfect harmony with her natural element (water) that is very appealing.
She IS actually lovely, likeable & easy to relate to. She is not perfect & has no false humility about herself either. And that, my Fellow-Readers, is no mean feat considering how many authors seem to miss the point entirely by creating these „oh-so-very-speshul snowflakes” whose specialness lies in being insufferable („oh, please don’ tell me I am special, for I know I am not, though everone else keeps telling me I AM”) and spoils the whole reading process, even if the story is a good one.
It is also a refreshing change that Zoe – upon learning that she is heir to her Coru grandmother & Prime of the Lalindar family – instead of denial and running away from her fate in the usual fashion of „chosen ones” of most fantasy novels, actually takes to her role like a duck is taking to water (pun intended), flowing into & filling in the space she needs to occupy naturally without any needless rumpus.
- The characters in general: main as well as secondary characters are well drawn. There is no black & white characterisation.
- The love affair is also understated: part of the story, without events having to evolve around it all the time. There are no earthquakes, fireworks all screaming: „HE/SHE is the ONE!!!” It is still believable how the 2 characters are influencing / are slowly being drawn to each other without the author having to hit us on the head every other page with how much they are in love, describing every move / look / facial expression / thought / feeling in excruciating detail.
- Reviewed in the United States on August 24, 2022Reasonably interesting world-building, but really, it's so cliche: the main character who initially seemed so disadvantaged turns out to be fabulously rich, well-connected, and filled with magical powers that no one suspected. Wouldn't it be nice if we could just spread our fingers and wish something big would happen. I'm a little too old to really fall for this anymore. Also, the romantic connection was not, in my opinion, all that well written. Still, a nice fluffy fantasy in a reasonable coherent, magical world. It's easy to like rich, well-connected people with superpowers, but isn't that kind of a cheat? It's not really my fantasy, I guess.
- Reviewed in the United States on January 9, 2014Troubled Waters, by Sharon Shinn, is a first in a new series by a veteran author. It was just what I wanted: a tightly focused book that built around a clash of ideas and ideals. The plot is relatively simple: The main character, Zoe Ardelay, begins the book in a grief-stricken haze due to her father's death. She then expands to fill the book as the story sweeps forward and outward from her.
As we learn at the very beginning of the book, Zoe's father Nevarr took her into exile and then, after raising her alone and apart from all kin, he died. The king's adviser arrived to bring Zoe back to the capital - ostensibly to become the king's fifth wife and "restore balance" - and Zoe instead walks away and into the world. As Zoe regains knowledge of politics and kinship, she learns that much of what she didn't know could hurt her, and that she, in turn, has the power to hurt or to help others, if she so cares to do it.
Shinn's world-building is rich and colorful, and even the cameo characters are lovingly described. The five elements drive everything, from fate to fortune to the seasons, and are a natural part of everyday conversation. The cheer and charity that Shinn spreads across her works make kindness into a cultural strength rather than a rare treasure. And Shinn's strength of focus in the writing kept what could have been an unwieldy and lumpy plot from getting out of control and losing me as a reader.
Shinn's turns of phrase were intellectually tasty, too. There were points in the book where I would go back and re-read a comment or a description because of the poetry and word-craft involved in that construction. While I can't rank Shinn up with Bujold on the strength of one book, I can certainly say that she soothes the same need. Her romance was understated, and full of strength. There was little swooning, and little agony of doubt. There was self-understanding, admiration, and clash of wills to match the clash of ideals.
In short, this was an excellent book that caught me in just the correct mood for it. I appreciated the lack of Big Bad Evil, or even really scary bad guys. Most of the book was taken up by Zoe's learning and growing processes, and figuring out how the world works. And once she has figured it out, she certainly uses that knowledge. I almost see her as the Thelani Water character out of the Cast in Chaos series - nearly unfeeling, almost amoral - until, suddenly, she's not.
Top reviews from other countries
BrennaReviewed in Canada on February 3, 20245.0 out of 5 stars I loved this one
As another reviewer had stated, if you enjoyed reading Summers at Castle Auburn, you will want to read Troubled Waters.
I sank into this world and into Zoe's life. I LIKED Zoe. I liked Darien, too - and, all the other characters.
I want to go back to Welce and spend more time with them all.
Fortunately for me, this is Book One. :)
Kindle CustomerReviewed in Germany on May 14, 20205.0 out of 5 stars A great read
Well written, interesting story , characters and background. Very different from other fantasy on the market. Highly recommended and suitable for all readers
SB SamphireReviewed in the United Kingdom on January 9, 20145.0 out of 5 stars Rich, romantic fantasy
I love the heroine of this novel, Zoe, who is strong and passionate and warm-hearted and has a temper that can be terrible. I love the way she progresses from feeling like an empty shell at the beginning of the book, hollowed out by grief, to finding her own true power (and a perfect partner, too, along the way). I love the rich worldbuilding and the fabulous magic of the story. The romance is a subplot, not the main plot, but it's wonderfully handled. I can't wait to read the sequel, about one of one of my favorite side-characters in this book!
Hayley CannReviewed in Canada on May 17, 20144.0 out of 5 stars An Intriguing New World.
Zoe Ardelay has lived in exile with her father isince she was thirteen. Once a high ranking noble, her father lost favour with the King, and was forced to eke out a living in a remote village. In their land, elemental blessings are consulted for guidance, and balance between the elements is sought after for an harmonious life. When Zoe's father dies from illness, an emissary from the King announces she has been chosen to be his fifth wife. Deep mourning robs Zoe from her ability to care or even protest this reversal of fortune. But Zoe was born under the elemental blessing of water, and women of water are unpredictable. Will Zoe find her own way to restore balance to the court of the King?
I am rarely disappointed with Shinn. Even on a bad day, she makes an interesting intrigue and sympathetic characters. Zoe is no exception. She is an interesting and resourceful young woman. I did not like all of the main characters however and the court, outside of the four wives of the king seemed a little bland. On the other hand, the concept of the elemental blessings is very interesting and I can't wait to see how this turns out in future books.
Paul TapnerReviewed in the United Kingdom on June 25, 20124.0 out of 5 stars The power of the elements
A new fantasy novel from Sharon Shinn, a writer who specialises in fantasy and science fiction novels with strong heroines and a touch of romance.
This one runs for three hundred and ninety nine pages and is divided into thirty three chapters.
It's a completely new setting for any stories from this writer, with no tie ins at all to any of her previous work or series. And it is pretty much self contained, although it does leave the door open for more stories from this world and with these characters at the same time.
Our heroine is Zoe Ardelay. The world she lives in is quite an interesting creation because although this is a fantasy world it's more advanced than the usual one. The level of civilisation and technology is largely 18th - 19th century from our world, and rudimentary vehicles feature. But the land is ruled over by a King. And there's magic all around. In the elements. And everyone is attuned to one of them in particular. People will go to temples and draw out coins from there which have symbols on them that give guidance.
Zoe has been living in a remote village with her father, who was exiled from the royal court. But he has just passed away. Soon after the funeral she is summoned to the royal court. To become the King's latest wife. She travels there with Darien, a rather serious man who was sent to summon her. But she takes a chance to slip away and to find and her own path in life. Which is one that reveals she has a great deal of power.
All of which will come in handy when dealing with the intrigues that await...
This is not a book of incident for the most part. It's one of character and of setting. Two things that this writer excels at. And the first half of the book does pass by very nicely as it deals with this. The world you're introduced to is a fascinating creation and Zoe is a very appealing lead. And the supporting characters she interacts with as she learns about her surroundings are an appealing lot as well.
This does treaten to sag a little when it gets beyond that point as Zoe is put into a different setting. But then it grabs again thanks to some intrigue and drama and a whole new set of interesting relationships for her.
Plus a very nciely handled romance. Another thing that the writer excels at.
A likeable heroine in an interesting and genuninely original fantasy setting results in a very good read.







