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I found the story difficult to plumb. Motivations were murky, actions taken often not to move the plot forward or tell the story, but merely to create conflict. A well-drawn character will not only entangle a reader emotionally, but their actions will be predictable within a certain range. Is Antonio a good guy? Why does he make a leering comment about a teenager? Is Marcus an alpha male or a doormat? No one does anything overtly stupid, just undermotivated. I'm still shaking my head as to why the presumed future bad guy was mad about something they already knew.
Passive voice and otherwise weak prose contribute to the confusion. The word "just" is used 162 times. Sentences needed to be strengthened and pared, commas needed adding, and entire sections needed cutting.
An "OBTW", or "Oh, By The Way," is when something is introduced too far along in the text, with no foreshadowing. Strider introduced a side character more than halfway through the book. Oh, by the way, her best friend's daughter is psychic, she needs help, and here she comes! I still can't figure out what she was doing there, except to create a little more unneeded conflict between the two lead males. In another OBTW, the lead male uses a catchphrase near the end of the book, which was not used previously. While catchphrases can be overdone, this is exactly the kind of detail that would have made his character a bit deeper. Introducing it at the end of the book was baffling.Read more ›
quite good. Not so in this case more like not even bad just
tepid and indifferent. Did not like the characters and the plot
was just some warmed up left overs from bad twilight series
The fact that Amazon allows authors to self-publish is a great thing and I have discovered many great authors from this medium. This, however, is not one of them. While I admire any author that is willing to make themselves vulnerable by publishing their work and allowing the public to read it, I cannot recommend that anyone read this book. This read like a high school student's final exam. If it were written by one of my students, the grade would have been a C -. Don't waste your time.
My major complaint was the editing or lack thereof. There were a number of incorrectly spelled words and words missing in sentences. I found myself making corrections in my head as I was reading (this was distracting).
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