The writing was bad. Descriptions? There were descriptions somewhere in there?
Okay, so it's the plot of two vampires to get laid. I sympathize, as that's often the plot that I run with in a lot of the stories I write as well. But, there's nothing interesting about the story. Nothing really goes on. Two vampires figure out they can get off after they murder someone. Okay. I summed up the whole of the story there for you.
The sex scenes...wait, there were sex scenes? No. There was one. And it was over in a single line. Basically it was on par with what I've come to expect from an Omegle RP session.
C'mon! I've read more descriptive Ikea catalogs, I've read hotter reviews of refrigerators, and I should have spent my money on a burger from McDonalds. At least I'd have a full stomach to accompany the empty feeling I got after forcing myself to finish this book.