- File Size: 465 KB
- Print Length: 149 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publication Date: June 13, 2017
- Sold by: Amazon Digital Services LLC
- Language: English
- ASIN: B071GQ5FXS
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Lending: Not Enabled
- Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #1,589 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
The Vampire's Slave (Tales of Vampires Book 1) Kindle Edition
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Claire is 18 years old, unhappy that she’s single and, “for as long as she could remember”, she’s wanted to have a baby. At the opening of the story we learn that she has just turned 18, this day is her 18th birthday. I think it would have made more sense for this character to be somewhere around 25 - 30 years old, at least. To be 18 and thinking like that is just silly.
I was honestly grossed out when the vampire has made the woman strip and he is described as looking at her “with want as he looked the young girl up and down.” Young girl? Seriously? EW! Sorry, it weirds me out when a sex scene describes a woman as a young girl. I guess using young woman isn’t lurid enough?
A lot of the dialog, especially Claire’s, is stupid. When Eric tells her he will mate her she responds with “I’m not going to be some fertile servant for an agent of darkness.” At another point she also says she doesn’t want his “dark babies” inside of her. You know what sweetie? Beggars can’t be choosers. At least he tells her she talks funny.
Some of the sex scene descriptions are stupid, too. For example, while bending over the kitchen counter receiving and enjoying oral, “Claire balled her fist as tight as she could, slamming it down onto the marble counter top.” Who does that? Besides Claire, of course. Did she manage to break the marble? I understand it’s a soft stone and while a popular choice, is not the most durable choice for use in the kitchen. I care more about the kitchen countertop than I do either of these characters.
All this is by the time I’ve reached 7% completion of the book. I don’t like leaving books unfinished and maybe I’ll come back to it eventually, but for now I can’t do any more.