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Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon?, Vol. 1 (light novel) Kindle Edition
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But while riches and renown are incentive enough for most, Bell Cranel, would-be hero extraordinaire, has bigger plans.
He wants to pick up girls.
Is it wrong to face the perils of Dungeon alone, in a single-member guild blessed by a failed goddess? Maybe. Is it wrong to dream of playing hero to hapless maidens in Dungeon? Maybe not. After one misguided adventure, Bell quickly discovers that anything can happen in the labyrinth--even chance encounters with beautiful women. The only problem? He's the one who winds up the damsel in distress!
- LanguageEnglish
- PublisherYen On
- Publication dateDecember 16, 2014
- Reading age13 years and up
- Grade level8 and up
- File size13360 KB
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Suzuhito Yasuda is the artist most known for his illustrations for the Durarara!! light novel series as well as the hit new light novel series, Is It Wrong to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon? --This text refers to the paperback edition.
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- Publisher : Yen On; Illustrated edition (December 16, 2014)
- Publication date : December 16, 2014
- Language : English
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- Print length : 218 pages
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As the story opens, our young hero, Bell Cranell, is fleeing for his life from a massive Minotaur. With only a few weeks on the job as an "adventurer", he is a tad behind where he ought to be so far. He certainly is not prepared to face a Minotaur (or anything else, for that matter) that is from a dungeon far lower than where he is adventuring currently.
However, Bell's whole life is about to change when he is saved by the beautiful, and perhaps one of the most talented adventurers alive, Aiz Wallenstein. Feeling overwhelmed and terrified, Bell flees without thanking her. Still this does lead to an interesting development, in that Bell is very much smitten with Aiz, and so dedicates himself to rising as fast as he can so he can be at her level, and thus be worthy of her.
Of course, none of this sits well with his goddess sponsor, and head of their tiny (at only the two of them) *familia*, Hestia. In this setting, a *familia* is a group run by a god or goddess. You see, many years ago in the story, the gods and goddesses grew bored and decided that they wished to come down and live among the "children" as they call the mortals. Be they human, demi-human, animal person, or other creatures, all of these mortals had lives that fascinated the deities. Hence they came down to the lower world and made a pact to not use a their powers other than to bless those who associate with them and form *familia* with them. True to the name, the *familia* are very much like informal families that stick together through thick and thin to serve their patron god or goddessgoddess and each other.
Anyways, Hestia has a huge crush on Bell. In fact, she might even be in love with him. Of course Bell is completely ignorant of this fact, and for good reason. It isn't stated whether this is true or not, but I get the feeling that the gods and humans being together is not common in this fictional world. Hence, the reason for Bell not knowing of Hestia's feelings for him.
Add to all of this, his incredible naivete and early weakness, and he doesn't seem to be the most promising prospect for an adventurer. But Bell has a secret ability, that only Hestia knows about. Even Bell doesn't know he has this talent. It's called the Realis Phase. Essentially, the more he determined he becomes to succeed, the stronger he'll get. And rapidly, for that matter.
So essentially, he has being the "Determinator" as an actual power. This is the charm of the story. Or at least, part of the charm. Bell is relatable, in a very real way. He's not an instant expert at anything. True he has a super power of rising unnaturally fast, but the story of hard work really is a good moral and presents a charactrer you can root for.
In fact, it seems his naïveté, niceness, hard work, so on, are seen as impressive in-story as well. His woobieness is something that makes others want to protect him.
Now, he isn't completely pure, though. As the title suggests, part of Bell's desire to become an adventurer patrolling Dungeons is to rescue beautiful girls and start a harem. I kid you not. It starts out like a cleaner version of *High School DxD*, and then rapidly switches direction.
The other impressive part of the tale was how the author took various RPG elements and made them into a workable and remarkably believable part of the fictional world. Anyone likes RPGs, or certain Japanese media dranchises like *Log Horizon*, *Sword Art Online*, so on, will really like this story.
The characters are funny and really draw you in as well. You find yourself cheering for Bell and Hestia, and hoping that Eina, Bell's half-elf advisor, and Aiz pay attention to him. Also, seeing how much Belle and Hestia sacrifice for each other is really cool.
One of the pics in the front gallery might make you think this isn't your type of story. But don't worry, it is more about one goddess being a bully and not about some weird story. Just a warning so folks don't get the wrong idea, and refrain from reading a good fun book.
I can't wait until volume 2 is released at the end of April so I can continue the adventures of *familia* Hestia.
While I wasn't necessarily disappointed with the first volume of Is It Wrong to Try to Pick up Girls in a Dungeon, I did feel a little let down. More on that later. Before I start talking about what I didn't like, I think it would be better if I told you about what I did like.
The first thing I like is the story itself. None of what I read here is new. You've got a boy who wants to become a hero but is something of an underdog, a beautiful girl that he falls in love with, and a fantasy world based on an MMORPG type of leveling system. I've seen this in anime and read this in books countless times. However, that doesn't make this any less enjoyable. I had fun reading this, just like I had fun reading every other story with a similar genre.
One areas where I feel the story itself shines the most is its side characters, and by side characters, I mean everyone who's name isn't Bell Cranel. The most notably interesting characters in this story are the female cast, which makes sense, as this is story follows typical harem tropes. The females characters that you meet in this story are all an interesting an eclectic bunch. Their personalities are fully fleshed out and they have their own goals and desires. Aside from their obvious infatuation with the main character, I quite like them. My favorite, by the way, is the Hestia, otherwise known as Loli Big Boobs by her fellow Gods and Goddesses.
Now, despite my back-handed insult to Bell Cranel, the main character of the story, I do not think he is a bad character. As far as harem protagonists go, there are definitely worse. I think what I enjoy most about Bell is his innocence. He's very childlike and innocent, despite his un-innocent desire to have a harem. This makes him more likable than most harem protagonists because he actually has a personality beyond "OH MY GOD, I JUST FELL INTO THIS WOMAN'S BOOBS!" which seems to be the personality most characters of this genre have.
Good story and decent characters aside, I did have some problems with this light novel.
The first was the writing itself. Now, I'll admit that I don't read first person stories very often. I think the only books I've touched that are in first person is Highschool DxD, The Dresden Files, and the Percy Jackson series. That being said, those books, minus perhaps Highschool DxD, were a lot more fluid and smooth than DanMachi. From the moment I started reading this story, I found it difficult to keep going. The writing style is very stilted and awkward, making it more difficult to read. While I'm not grammar nazi, I also think more than half the sentences in this story were fragments, though this could just be my imagination playing tricks on me. Regardless, most of the sentences were very short and choppy, which meant that, throughout the entire story, I felt like my eyes were being put through a cheese grater.
Oddly enough, I think this might have been done on purpose. When I read the parts of this story that went into someone else's POV, the story flowed much more smoothly. I'm almost wondering if the author wrote Bell's POV in this choppy, fragmented manner as a means of letting us get more of a feel for Bell's personality and thought process. Granted, that is merely speculation, but I wouldn't know what to think if the strange and awkward writing was just a mistake that none of the editors noticed.
While the writing style threw me off, I did eventually get used to it. I still can't say I like it, but the story and characters were interesting enough to hold me through the end, and I will be reading the next volume.
The story had me on the edge of my seat as it covered, IIRC the first, and maybe second, episode of the anime series. Still, getting into the minds of the characters is a big help.
The only problem I found in my copy is that, after 6 years of publishing the English Translation, Yen Press has yet to correct several spelling/grammatical errors in the book. A good example was on page 102, on the fourth line: "Invitations to the Celebration had been disturbed by the host's Familia." Disturbed? I believe the correct word here is Distributed. This isn't the only error that slipped past the proofreader, but it, AHEM, Disturbed me enough that I remembered this particular line, having reread it several times to make sure I understood it. Fortunately, I only found less than a handful of these errors, but it can ruin a good reading rhythm as you go back to try to make sense of the previous line.
The story had me on the edge of my seat as it covered, IIRC the first, and maybe second, episode of the anime series. Still, getting into the minds of the characters is a big help.
The only problem I found in my copy is that, after 6 years of publishing the English Translation, Yen Press has yet to correct several spelling/grammatical errors in the book. A good example was on page 102, on the fourth line: "Invitations to the Celebration had been disturbed by the host's Familia." Disturbed? I believe the correct word here is Distributed. This isn't the only error that slipped past the proofreader, but it, AHEM, Disturbed me enough that I remembered this particular line, having reread it several times to make sure I understood it. Fortunately, I only found less than a handful of these errors, but it can ruin a good reading rhythm as you go back to try to make sense of the previous line.
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