- File Size: 3900 KB
- Print Length: 34 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publisher: Katarr Kanticles Press (June 14, 2013)
- Publication Date: June 14, 2013
- Sold by: Amazon Digital Services LLC
- Language: English
- ASIN: B00DEX6IJW
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Lending: Enabled
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- #3853 in Kindle Store > Kindle Short Reads > One hour (33-43 pages) > Science Fiction & Fantasy
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- #6849 in Kindle Store > Kindle eBooks > Science Fiction & Fantasy > Science Fiction > Anthologies & Short Stories
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Searching for clues, Natalie combs through closets and shelves, hoping to connect with something... anything. But when she settles on a child's play room, and begins to explore a toy train set, she is transported to another realm, where wild storms and vast bodies of water engulf her. She hears words from an unknown source telling her about the trials she must face... trials that will have an impact on many. But is she up for the task?
The natural forest setting, and the whimsical songs offered a magical backdrop, which was initially quite lovely! However, too much attention was given to the songs and descriptives, which began to feel repetitive as the story progressed. Conversely, not enough attention was given to character development, or to important plot points surrounding the meaning and significance of the trials. These and other aspects of the story felt underdeveloped and awkward. Further, the move to have Natalie look into a mirror to have her physical features described to the reader could have been handled differently. In order for the story to make sense, the author had to spell out what was going on, by way of a new character presented near the end.
Overall, there were issues in this story surrounding character development and pacing. Still, the concept was unique, and the other realm was imaginative and vivid.
Note: This book was provided by the author in exchange for an honest review.