The growth of lead character Sofia was perfect, from never-been-in-a-real-natural-environment clueless, slightly spoiled, and judgemental (but honestly sore, so she gets some sympathy from this reader, even when she kind of whines), to someone who does what she's promised to do, and finds not just a romance but a family-by-choice, a real place to belong among the interesting assortment of other cast, including the huge, feathery, saurian riding/pack-beasts <3 with claws and minds of their own.
The world (both its wintry wilds and the corporate-controlled resort bureaucracy), the pace, and the happy ending, where Sofia gets to exercise her own area of expertise, are all believable and well-crafted. Despite being under 70 pages according to the info, the story didn't feel too short, which is rare for me to say! I think I like it as much as Ms. Martinez's previous holiday SFR novella, "Safety Protocols for Human Holidays" (which is also F/F, though I don't know if she plans to continue so for *cough, cough* 2019's, 2020's, etc.).
Oh, as for proofreading, it's good. I caught one duplicated "on" (accidentally before as well as after "quietly"), one missing hyphen in a long, phrasal adjective ("-clean-sheets-"), and "deep" where it really should be "depth" or "depths"; that's it.
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