Dacian tends to be a very weak character in most scenes, then he turns around and is a hero. Everyone just expected that he should be so grateful to Fein and his protection, even though he never asked for it. It was Keirn who brought them to Prague and into Feins life. Even Keirn says at one point that Dacian was being selfish because he doesn't agree with the way Fein handles things. But everyone just expected him to go along with it because Fein was "protecting" him. Anytime Dacian fought against things, he was the a$$hole.
And can we talk about the missing characters??? Ethan from book one was never mentioned again. The last thing he said was he was finishing a job then would meet them in Prague. Dacian even said in this book he didn't know any magic breakers.... What about Ethan being a magic breaker???? Tala was briefly mentioned and said he was with the hunter. Would have been nice to see that transition. Tyn, who was supposed to be a major part of Feins life, wasn't even mentioned in this book. He was in the thick of it all in books 2 and 3, yet not even mentioned here!?!?
This author has great potential in writing some great books, but really drops the ball in this series. It's one thing having characters come and go, but at least have the decency to explain where they have gone or why they are no longer a part of the books. We readers remember characters who have had major parts in the books.
So the three stars is for the overall series. Grammar mistakes so frequent it takes away from the story, weak characters, missing characters to never be mentioned again, and the sense, to me at least, that the writing was rushed and not much thought given to it. This author spent so much time describing, in excruciating details, every house, wall, floor, street, clothing, magical elements... So on and so forth, that she didn't realize she left our characters from one book to the next.... Just sloppy writing.
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