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Reviewed in the United States on April 17, 2018
The concept of the story is very good, but my 5th grader could have written this better. The most commonly used words throughout this book were first, then, next and finally, because this is how the author wrote nearly every paragraph. The characters had the opportunity to be very interesting, but they fell flat very quickly. Just a very poorly written story.
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