I thoroughly enjoyed this book. I was fun, exciting, and enchanting. I loved the different locations, and the different adventures they went on. there were a few typos, or word repetitions. But other than that the book was a complete and utter delight. If you ever want a proof reader feel free to contact me at Willowgreentree@hotmail.com. thanks again for your story telling talent, and thanks for being generous enough to share it.