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Would've been a lot better if....
on April 2, 2015
I'll start by saying that it's a well written story, and it did keep me entertained......until the end.
Usually I'll fly through a series, especially this kind that keeps the story going. But somewhere between the beginning and end of this book I decided I'm not buying the last book.
I wanted more Derek and Sage. Melody got on my nerves, I didn't like her character so reading more about her and Sage than Derek and Sage irked me. In fact, I read more about everyone else and Sage through the majority of the book than about Derek and her.
The book consisted of 80% Sage and her million friends and issues.
20% Sage and Derek. Here I thought it was a story about them.
After sleeping on it, I've come to the conclusion that the book is too crowded with Characters and side plots. Sages career, Sages Mom and Ralph issues, Sages drama, Sages negative inner babble, Sage trying to see Derek.
Sometimes less drama is better. It over shadowed the love story. Then on the last page BAM! a new drama to carry on to the final book.
Word of advice, read the synopsis and reviews for next book, then decide if you really need to spend 3.99$ to get the end of a story that should've been wrapped up in this book. For me, I get the idea of the end without having to deal with all the other characters and drama.