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Uptight Public Defender gives up control to 2 hot police officers, Sex is hot! HEA
July 16, 2017
This was my first Renee Rose book. I will read a few more and hope that she gives me more of a story.
This one was too sketchy and far too short on plot, tension, and resolution. The sex was hot, but I like a good story, too. Catching the 'stalker' that quickly was just too easy. Public Defender, Sloane Waters felt like she was being followed for several days. After catching the 'adoring stalker', the story should have had a real bad dude to catch. After all, Sloane had two hunky police officers to protect her.
The story starts out with Sloane buying the two officers coffee. They try to pick her up in the parking lot, but she isn't interested, even if they are too hot to be real. That same night they are all in attendance at the retirement party for Judge Tell. They finally get her to agree to have them over and see what develops. Really? She invites two virtual strangers back to her house knowing that they want to both have sex with her, and she has no qualms. More story line definitely needed to make this scenario even plausible since she is over 18 yrs old.
We get a too fast ending to this story. Suggestion: Renee, This story has real possibilities, at some point, please rewrite it and give it the depth and length it needs. As another person mentioned, an epilogue would also be a good idea. NET: GOOD SEXY STORY with HEA, needs to be at least twice as long. I was not aware that this was part of an anthology.