The plot had the potential to be very interesting, but the writing is poorly organized and incredibly confusing. He jumps from time and place abruptly, leaving the reader guessing which scene is being played. All he needed was to put a city name and date stamp at the transition points to give the reader a clue that the setting has changed. Also, an abundant misuse of the comma makes the writing clumsy.
Why so many great reviews? His wife is a senior exec at Random House and former Amazon exec. Great marketing makes up for a mediocre product.
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