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1.0 out of 5 stars Personal Development for Dumb People, October 29, 2008
This review is from: Personal Development for Smart People: The Conscious Pursuit of Personal Growth (Hardcover)
I have been a reader of Steve Pavlina's blog and was really impressed by the quality of some of his articles on the blog. Therefore, I was very excited when I came to know about his book. Unfortunately, the book is an unmitigated disappointment.

The author has tried hard to tie various component of personal development into three universal principles that can be applied to any situation. Unfortunately human personality is a much more nuanced thing that defies such neat categorizations. The attempt to force fit the 'fundamental principles of personal development(!)' into neat categories can only result in such inanities as love + truth = oneness; truth + power = courage; etc. There is no explanation on why only these categories are considered universal, why not others? After all we have a long list of desirable qualities say virtue, honor, commitment, persistence, discipline etc. etc. On what basis do you pick 3 of them and declare them to be 'fundamental principles'? If truth, love and power are the fundamental principals of personality, then what about the others? The author believes that others are just a combination of these 3. So,

Oneness= Truth + Love
Courage= Love + Power
Authority= Truth + Power
Intelligence= Truth + Love + Power

I am not sure if this is an exhaustive list of all desirable personality traits. May be other things can also be derived from fundamental principles in some different combination. May be further research can show that "commitment = 2/5* power + 1/3* love" or something like that. I don't know.

The point is that there is no scientific basis for claiming that truth, power and love are the basic three principles and others are just a combination of them. There are no hypothesis, no tests, no analysis and no proofs. No reference to any studies in any university of repute. No double blind tests on sample population. Just results. Whatever author says is a revelation that does not require any external validation. His assertion is enough since it is based on his personal experience. Believe it and you will see the results.

My second complain is that the style is very boring and the book is unnecessarily lengthy. Probably, it is because the author has tried to fit in everything in the same structure: Principles-> components-> blocks to principles and -> how to improve on it. Therefore even when no further elaboration is needed on a point, the author is tempted to add his 'two words' on it. The entire content of the book can be summarized in just couple of pages without loss of any information. In fact the first 5 star review on Amazon has all the information that you will get from the book (except for the equations: love + power = courage etc.)

Finally, this book proves that a blog and a book are two entirely different mediums. Something that may pass as intelligent and thought provoking on a blog may not necessarily cross the bar in a book form where readers are accustomed to see more rigor.

Bottom line is that this book is a boring compilation of author's personal opinions on personal development, some of which may be true; others may not, since there is no evidence either way except author's own assertions. If you think that one data point is large enough sample to draw conclusions and put your efforts to see if it works for you, then go ahead and buy this book.
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Initial post: Nov 14, 2008 9:23:42 PM PST
Jack Zavada says:
Great review. Thanks for posting it.

I always read the one-star reviews first to get an opposing viewpoint to the "bandwagon" effect. Your analysis was perceptive and expressed very well. An author's friends, family and fans can easily skew the rating system, so the negative reviews may be the most honest.

Posted on Nov 29, 2008 3:03:43 AM PST
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Posted on Nov 29, 2008 3:06:09 AM PST
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Posted on Dec 4, 2008 10:19:18 PM PST
Nata says:
Very thoughtful and objective review! A well-balanced opinion supported by solid arguments. It was very helpful!

Posted on Feb 19, 2009 12:44:21 PM PST
Great, useful review.
It is very sober and unskewed. The material presented in the book is a mere theory, or set of revelations, that Mr Pavlina came up with.
Believing it (to whatever extent) or not is a personal choice.

In making that choice, certain weight should be attributed to the lack of facts and studies that would substantiate the claims in the book. Btw, the same can be said about Pavlina's blog - he claims that juice feasting cures cancer, and veganism is the ultimate way to go...Really? The size of the sample (in this case, 1) is not statistically viable. What about the counterexamples, those disproving the alleged supremeness of veganism, and proving the benefits of consumption of quality dairy products and meats? (to begin, check out http://beyondveg.com/)

Overall, it may be a good inspirational/motivational material. After all, it's something you can think about and exercise your mind - likely better than doing nothing, although the latter proves beneficial also, when done appropriately.

Posted on Mar 3, 2009 2:43:32 PM PST
D. Weekley says:
EVERYTHING is personal opinion....

In reply to an earlier post on Mar 14, 2009 10:49:20 AM PDT
"EVERYTHING is personal opinion.... "

Uh, sounds like someone is not familiar with the scientific method - but is a victim of modern American education.

It's really nice to know that the composition of water, H2O, is merely a matter of "personal opinion".

How funny.

Jerry

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Last edited by the author on Mar 19, 2009 11:16:55 PM PDT
Yang Xu (concerning Freefall's one-star post) wrote...

Are you even a successful person?
I don't think you understand the book.
I would also like to say that you're making an idiot of yourself with this review.
However I laud your courage for posting a 1 star review. Even though you might be an idiot in this review.

Something tells me:

You don't understand the book either. Maybe you should read it.
Your name-calling doesn't speak too highly of you. Maybe it does under certain circumstances.
You do not know what success is. Successful people don't write things like you have, nor are they negative.

It behooves you to look in the mirror to see if maybe YOU are the one with the problem.

Maybe then you wouldn't be so immature in how you handle debates.

Would Steve Pavlina look at the person who wrote the one-star review the way you have? No, I think not. You can be sure he handled it as a mature adult would. Mature adults do not resort to name-calling.

There are two sides to every issue and some people just don't know the value of this fact. Freefall has read the book and delivered a well-written and thought-provoking review of the book. He has attacked the book, not the author who wrote it - and has not committed any logical fallacies here.

You flunked at this one.

Your posts are very ugly and they rain on anyone's parade who sees them. Your ants have surely invaded my picnic!

By reading the one-star post, and then reading yours, I can clearly see who the more successful one is. It appears to me you are somehow threatened by the post.

It is very common for small thinkers to either laugh at or attempt to destroy what they don't understand.

Not many are amused by your posts as shown by their almost unanimous regard of your posts as being useless to the thread.

The saying sometimes used for name-callers applies: "Whatever you say bounces off me (speaking for Freefall) and sticks to you."

I'm not calling you stupid but your posts speak highly of you.

Have a good day.

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