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The potential is there. Could use more finesse
on February 10, 2014
As a developing author myself, I understand the nifty aspect of multiple Points of View. Unfolding the story via many perspectives should allow for a richer experience of the unfolding story. It certainly eases the process for the writer.
As a reader, however, hopping around from one head to another is irritating.
Fisher has the potential for a good story here, but I'm afraid I got snagged by not knowing who to care about. As well, perhaps the "heat" developed a bit too predictably for me.